presenting our pitch.

our presentation to the class of our pitch went quite well. no one seemed to have anything majorly negative to say about our idea and we seemed to have nearly everything sorted about what we would need.
there was another group in the class that were pitching for the same song. however, we felt that we should win the song over them as our idea is based completely around the band and their song and to change our idea to a new song would mean a whole new idea being former. where as their idea could be altered to fit a new song very easily.
one of the thing that we did take note of from the feedback we received was that we would need to break up the story of the elephant running through town with some other cut shots of a band/the band playing music.